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Hide and Seek

Three cats on icy ground play hide and seek and disappear blackbirds are startled

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/2/2010 9:25:00 AM
I love the picture you make with this one.And what a relief. My instinct about you was right the first time. haha. (your gender. hahaha). Hey, if you like a funny poem, I hope you will check out THat Potent Urge (gotta go , gotta go right now) I thought I could win LOL with it, and guess what the heck I did?? I went and clicked on the WRONG poem when I entered it in the contest so dang it, the judge never even SAW it. CRAP. That really made me kick myself hard. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/10/2010 10:14:00 AM
This brought a smile to my face. I bet the cats were startled also when they hit the ice and started to slide. Keep the humorous pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
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Date: 2/10/2010 3:39:00 AM
funny!! Again
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Date: 2/5/2010 11:08:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your Haiku. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 2/4/2010 3:31:00 PM
enjoyed reading today. do you still have ice? we just have rain, it seems all the time.
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Date: 2/1/2010 4:08:00 AM
Nice imagery
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