Hide and Seek

Three cats on icy ground
play hide and seek and disappear
blackbirds are startled
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
April 2, 2010 at 9:25 AM
I love the picture you make with this one.And what a relief. My instinct about you was right the first time. haha. (your gender. hahaha). Hey, if you like a funny poem, I hope you will check out THat Potent Urge (gotta go , gotta go right now) I thought I could win LOL with it, and guess what the heck I did?? I went and clicked on the WRONG poem when I entered it in the contest so dang it, the judge never even SAW it. CRAP. That really made me kick myself hard. LUv, Andrea
Kendrick Avatar
February 10, 2010 at 10:14 AM
This brought a smile to my face. I bet the cats were startled also when they hit the ice and started to slide. Keep the humorous pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
Culverhouse Avatar
February 10, 2010 at 3:39 AM
funny!! Again
Hilliker Avatar
February 5, 2010 at 11:08 AM
I enjoyed reading your Haiku. Thanks for sharing.
Culverhouse Avatar
February 4, 2010 at 3:31 PM
enjoyed reading today. do you still have ice? we just have rain, it seems all the time.
Palli Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 4:08 AM
Nice imagery
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