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"hidden Words"

Secrets that stay alone

                          grow without being spoken

                                                         all the time buried.

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Poet Destroyer A

December 10, 2012 at 8:50 PM

i love this one...it pertains to me right now..pd

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

October 1, 2010 at 12:18 PM

Its those hidden secrets gets us into trouble but let them out and share and all is well.. a lovely piece od poetry Michael.. enjoyed by the Jersey Girl..luv..

Wilma Neels

October 1, 2010 at 9:41 AM

Hmmm quite an interesting senryu Michael. So much truth attached to it as well! Love this ;) Wilma

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 1, 2010 at 7:10 AM

I enjoyed reading your fantastic poetry this morning. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with good health, love, and lots of inspiration Michael. Love, Carol

Jayne Eggins

October 1, 2010 at 4:47 AM

Brilliant Haiku ... smile loved this one love Jayne

Andrea Dietrich

September 30, 2010 at 5:43 PM

VERY good. LOVE it, Michael.

Sara Kendrick

September 30, 2010 at 3:49 PM

Yes, secrets can be bad but also some times they are best buried so that no one will know that secret..It should go to the grave with the person..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

September 30, 2010 at 3:32 PM

secrets can be a load, especially when keeping them bottled and the less you say the more time spent on dwelling, you captured that well on this senryu Michael, enjoyed your write...P.D.