Joanna Daniel Poet Acrostic

Hidden Treasure - Mia

H idden within its pages you will find 
I mmense riches that will transform your mind,
D eep, buried deep is true wisdom refined,
D elve into its core meaning well-defined,
E nigmatic stories with lessons lined,
N ow within your reach, are you so inclined?

T eacher Divine, it is sure to spellbind,
R enewing your soul and all of mankind,
E xamples of yore that serve to remind 
A ll this world will one day be left behind,
S tandards for everyone, 'tis mastermind,
U ncovering the fact that humankind 
R equires God to open spirit's eyes blind, 
E nshrouding us with precious peace of mind.



09.02.2021


Form: Acrostic monorhyme 

10 syllables per line 

For Kim Rodrigues' "Message in an acrostic 2" contest

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Alexis Y. September 18, 2021 at 6:40 PM Hi Jo, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your winning write;-) Alexis

Paula Goldsmith September 18, 2021 at 9:27 AM Congratulations on your win. Your "Hidden Treasure" is a creative/wonderful write. "Love it" Have a blessed day/weekend..............

Beata Agustin September 18, 2021 at 4:24 AM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... Both the obvious and hidden messages are God-exalting and faith-edifying. God bless you.

Jan Allison September 17, 2021 at 1:24 PM wonderful message Jo, many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Sam Kauffman September 17, 2021 at 11:24 AM Very clever and most creative Jo - there is hidden treasure in God's word meant to enrich us every day. Congratulations on your win! Blessings of the "word" to you!

Janice Canerdy September 17, 2021 at 7:29 AM Expressive, reverent, skillfully written piece. CONGRATS, Jo! Janice

Sean Kibble September 17, 2021 at 1:59 AM Great job Jo - Read the Word of God and follow it - congrats

Kim Rodrigues September 16, 2021 at 8:14 PM Truly, the world needs to grab onto the hidden treasure of the Word of God! Congratulations, Jo!

Gordon Mcconnell September 5, 2021 at 12:39 PM Great acrostic piece Jo, good line of thought with fine rhyme and flow too. Blessings,Gordon

Jack Horne September 4, 2021 at 8:08 AM beautiful write indeed

Demetrios Trifiatis September 4, 2021 at 5:37 AM Absolutely gorgeous, dearest, Jo! Good luck! Hugs xxx

Anitha Jayasankar September 2, 2021 at 10:49 PM Aww... This is just awesome Jo... You did the acrostic monorhyme very well... Hope it places high... Am yet to think what to write... Hugs... ~ Ani

Victor Buhagiar September 2, 2021 at 12:37 PM Excellent double acrostic. Best for a win.

Janice Canerdy September 2, 2021 at 7:13 AM Jo, this is exceptional--so skillfully written, deeply reverent, and expressive! Janice

Alexis Y. September 2, 2021 at 6:27 AM WoW! Jo, You did a great job with contest challenge. Good hidden message as well. I agree, reading the word of God can make one very rich. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Tom Cunningham September 2, 2021 at 5:49 AM Love the hidden message Jo, this looks complicated to do. Well written. Tom

Heidi Sands September 2, 2021 at 5:41 AM Excellent! Well done :)

Joseph May September 2, 2021 at 4:51 AM So true Jo, Very nicely penned