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My mind is like a map and my body is like a maze, the directions are not given but the path has many ways, swim in my intellectual oceans and lakes before you explore my inner streams and rivers, you must climb my emotional mountains and embark on untouched land before you can grasp my sensual fantasies and enter unknown territories, master north west east south of my thoughts and only then can you break down the forbidden walls and emerge into complete physical and emotional bliss!

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Date: 5/6/2024 9:11:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/12/2016 10:20:00 PM
NICOLETTE, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 6/11/2013 11:10:00 AM
- Nicolette, a very well done poem - I like it a lot! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/10/2013 2:25:00 PM
Laying out the map to your paradise with only one caveat: Value what you see in me. I adore this piece! Great job!
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