Hidden Pleasures

somewhere in the sunset
hidden pleasures lie
washed with golden sunbeams
invisible to the eye

I almost saw it once
I got so very close
but it was a mirage
yearning I suppose
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kendrick Avatar
December 14, 2009 at 3:33 PM
Beautiful, JB. Just adjust the imagination button and dream on to those pleasures. Keep the magical and creative pen flowing. Sara
Harper Avatar
December 14, 2009 at 12:50 PM
i like your use of personification
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