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Hidden Love

Once the Earth was waiting too much Flowering the best code It look like a wedding planned Just for it to land The earth was blooming to much The birds were cooing To pleasant it with lei of love Even the quiet was speaking too much Waiting for it like a plant wait for the sunlight to bloom it up It’s finally arrive, but it was eerie too much The earth soaked calamity instead of luscious The birds weren’t mellifluous enough even the quite was deaf enough The earth was sailing its own recked boat in its own land which was bloody enough It was raining too much that the drops were salty enough It seems like the Earth was waiting too much

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Date: 7/31/2023 7:13:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Aditi Garg
Date: 5/4/2024 12:10:00 AM
Thank you for being a kind person
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Aditi Garg
Date: 8/16/2023 8:45:00 PM
Thank you Beata for your kind and welcoming comment wish you a happy day

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