Hidden Love

Once the Earth was waiting too much
Flowering the best code
It look like a wedding planned
Just for it to land
The earth was blooming to much
The birds were cooing 
To pleasant it with lei of love
Even the quiet was speaking too much
Waiting for it like a plant wait for the sunlight to bloom it up
It’s finally arrive, but it was eerie too much
The earth soaked calamity instead of luscious
The birds weren’t mellifluous enough
 even the quite was deaf enough
The earth  was sailing its own recked boat in its own land which was bloody enough
It was raining too much that  the drops were salty enough
It seems like the Earth was waiting too much
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Agustin Avatar
July 31, 2023 at 7:13 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Garg Avatar
May 4, 2024 at 12:10 AM
Thank you for being a kind person
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August 16, 2023 at 8:45 PM
Thank you Beata for your kind and welcoming comment wish you a happy day
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