Hidden Love

Once the Earth was waiting too much
Flowering the best code
It look like a wedding planned
Just for it to land
The earth was blooming to much
The birds were cooing 
To pleasant it with lei of love
Even the quiet was speaking too much
Waiting for it like a plant wait for the sunlight to bloom it up
It’s finally arrive, but it was eerie too much
The earth soaked calamity instead of luscious
The birds weren’t mellifluous enough
 even the quite was deaf enough
The earth  was sailing its own recked boat in its own land which was bloody enough
It was raining too much that  the drops were salty enough
It seems like the Earth was waiting too much

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