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rough, tough stuff
dazzling in the heart of mother earth
… diamond in the rough
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Shango Avatar
June 4, 2009 at 5:27 AM
I love this poem ... this is a tremendous display of poetic gift ... the message is tantalizing. Thanks for your comment on poems ... you are a blessed friend. Love.
Peranteau Avatar
May 27, 2009 at 11:07 AM
Adeleke,..nice poem ! TY for your comment as well. james
Christian Avatar
May 27, 2009 at 10:48 AM
a great poem, thanks for your kind comments on my poem dancing with Jesus, it was amazing what I saw and I know when the day Jesus returns i will be dancing with joy for sure, God bless you from diane
Guzzi Avatar
May 27, 2009 at 10:42 AM
nice contest entry! GOOD luck hugs Light & Love
Megens Avatar
May 27, 2009 at 10:24 AM
NICE POEM ITS GREAT FOR THE CONTEST AND I CHANGED MY FORM THANKS TO YOU BUT TO HONEST I HAVE NO CLUE WHAT ANY FORM MEANS IM JUST A WRITER I NEVER HAD ANY EDUCATION PAST 6 GRADE SO I WILL TAKE ANY ADVICE FROM EVERYONE HERE SO MANY TALENTED POETS I AM WITH INCLUDING YOURSELF
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May 27, 2009 at 10:14 AM
Much for the reader to think about in just three lines. Nice use of rhyme and alliteration. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing. Karen
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