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rough, tough stuff
dazzling in the heart of mother earth
… diamond in the rough

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L'Nass Shango

Date: 6/4/2009 5:27:00 AM

I love this poem ... this is a tremendous display of poetic gift ... the message is tantalizing. Thanks for your comment on poems ... you are a blessed friend. Love.

James Peranteau

Date: 5/27/2009 11:07:00 AM

Adeleke,..nice poem ! TY for your comment as well. james

Diane Christian

Date: 5/27/2009 10:48:00 AM

a great poem, thanks for your kind comments on my poem dancing with Jesus, it was amazing what I saw and I know when the day Jesus returns i will be dancing with joy for sure, God bless you from diane

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/27/2009 10:42:00 AM

nice contest entry! GOOD luck hugs Light & Love

Brandy Megens

Date: 5/27/2009 10:24:00 AM

NICE POEM ITS GREAT FOR THE CONTEST AND I CHANGED MY FORM THANKS TO YOU BUT TO HONEST I HAVE NO CLUE WHAT ANY FORM MEANS IM JUST A WRITER I NEVER HAD ANY EDUCATION PAST 6 GRADE SO I WILL TAKE ANY ADVICE FROM EVERYONE HERE SO MANY TALENTED POETS I AM WITH INCLUDING YOURSELF

Date: 5/27/2009 10:14:00 AM

Much for the reader to think about in just three lines. Nice use of rhyme and alliteration. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing. Karen

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