Hidden Feelings

Are you okay? I ask 
I'm fine she typed as the blood dripped from her wrist
I’ve been there before I understand 
*The next week*
I call her shes crying I ask her if shes alright I want to believe she will say no I need you will you stay but instead she convinces me shes okay as I end the call she ends her life after all 
she was always there for me why wasn’t I there in her time of need 
I just can’t stop thinking its my fault I could’ve stopped her but in reality nothing would have stopped her maybe I really haven’t been there

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Date: 1/23/2014 6:45:00 PM
You can't blame yourself for another person's struggle. Especially when it's not your fault and there wass nothing you could do. Good poem
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Angela Paulsen
Date: 1/24/2014 5:22:00 PM
*thank you*
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Angela Paulsen
Date: 1/24/2014 5:21:00 PM
thanks you
Date: 1/23/2014 2:48:00 PM
- Painful thoughts, Angela..... well written. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Angela Paulsen
Date: 1/23/2014 3:29:00 PM
thank you so much
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