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Hidden feelings

I watch you from afar, my heart beats oh so fast But I can’t find the courage, will my feelings will last? Every time you smile, my world lights up so bright You are the beam of sunshine on the darkest night I want to tell you how i feel, but the words they just get stuck, i get a lump ,in my throat, I just cant speak up These feelings inside, I keep locked away ,hoping the day will come, that I can tell you how I feel and I know you are one Im Secretly in love with you, but you’ll never know It’s a bittersweet symphony, this is the hidden show My heart sings your name, in whispers oh so soft But the truth remains untold, a desire that maybe lost, I write you letters everyday, that I’ll never send Pour my heart out, in these words , my love I will defend In my dreams, you’re always by my side,a happiness oh so true But in realty, my feelings I hide,In the silence of a love for you

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Date: 9/17/2024 2:29:00 AM
Sometimes it takes a lot of courage to share your feelings, and if you don’t, you spend the rest of your life wondering what might have been. Nicely written, Rachael, welcome to Poetry Soup. John
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Rachael Bennett
Date: 9/17/2024 2:41:00 AM
Thankyou so much for your kind words. Very new to sharing my work but feel very welcome so Thankyou for reading my work
Date: 9/15/2024 4:04:00 AM
Feedback appreciated first time posting. Write for fun off top of my head .usually at early hours of morning.. never thought I would share these but here i am on bigger platform. sharing with complete strangers so this is a huge step as i have only ever shared with couple close friends and family so this is a big step as never thought it was good enough ECV
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