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Hidden Emotion

Even though I may look happy Insinde I am still depressed You go by what you see not think My saddened soul begins to sink I hate this world, I hate my life Tears of blood I grip my knife I think of how my world will end But yet I still cannot comprehend I chose my fate, but did I lie Leaving this world I will now die...

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/10/2009 4:24:00 AM

Your writings are so deep and sad. I only hope that it is fiction. You are getting a lot of poetry posted. If you wish to enter it into the contests you will need to take time and decide on the form. Forms of poetry can be found on the left side of page under Resources. I printed them all out made it more easy for myself. Also I always run the free spell check before I hit the submit button. I am not putting you down in no way just trying to help. Going to read more now. Love, Carol