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Hidden Depths

. gulls glide, their grey wings glinting . . in the glow of the f a d i n g s u n. below, the sea stirs . its surface trembling like a h e l d n o t e s o m e t h i n g unseen gathers, . brushing softly along the horizon’s edge. as the gulls r i s e h i g h e r, the ocean grows deeper, harboring truths no one will ever fully t o u c h

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Ink Empress

Date: 5/3/2025 5:34:00 AM

WOW Sis, this is so impressive and creative how youv managed to paint such vivid imagery and written such a descriptive poem in the shape of Z ! How clever and artistic! Im sure this must have taken so long for you to get it done! I once tried a shape poem long time ago! I love the way youv ended this especially! the ocean grows deeper, truths no one will ever fully t o u c h"For some reason it is also soothing! Every poem of yours is a fave for me! Best wishes! Sending you light always!

Billie Jama
Date: 5/3/2025 8:42:00 AM

Thank you so much, Sis. The Z shape took a while to get right, but it was worth it. I’m so glad the ending felt soothing to you—that was a quiet reflection that stayed with me. Would love to see your shape poem if you still have it! Sending light always : )