Hidden Depths

You are imbued with a misplaced elegance
Unsuited to a staunch buoyant belief.
Remarkable character strength disguised
And spies hidden like the thief.

A spark of recognition only brief
Glimpse a secret divinity spread thin.
A pilgrimage to discover inside
Start outside then work within.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Misaila Avatar
June 9, 2009 at 10:41 AM
thank you for your kind comments and i am thrilled that i'm your first favourite! as for yourself, i really ike the pick of words that you use, they are so unique, putting together a remarcable and original poem that i truly value! i really enjoy reading yours! love and hope to read you some more, Stephanie. ps: feel free to comment on the rest of my poems because i enjoy it! :))
Curcio Avatar
June 9, 2009 at 8:31 AM
Hidden depths indeed - within the poem and within the writer - and the reader. Well done indeed Paul
Stockwood Avatar
June 2, 2009 at 8:12 AM
excellent
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