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Hidden Chorus

crickets are singing
          in the heat, this summer day 
                    a hidden chorus 


Heidi Sands 

8/25/21

songsummerhaiku

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Indiana Shaw

Date: 8/30/2021 3:54:00 AM

You depicted the crickets so well, Heidi, forever heard, but, never seen, lovely . . . : )

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/30/2021 4:57:00 AM

Thank you so much Indiana. I hope all is well :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/26/2021 5:02:00 AM

Melodious Haiku that delights the soul, dearest Heidi! Hugs xxx

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/26/2021 5:18:00 AM

Thank you Demetrios. Hugs :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 8/26/2021 4:50:00 AM

I love your title and haiku Heidi! What a great idea! Happy Thursday!!

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/26/2021 5:18:00 AM

Thank you very much Mike. Happy Thursday :)

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 8/26/2021 3:18:00 AM

Nice one. Could not soup mail you. You missed an r. Kind wishes, Kai

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/26/2021 5:17:00 AM

Thank you Kai. I appreciate it :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/26/2021 3:08:00 AM

A lovely sound of summer Heidi, nature is wonderful indeed. Hope your week is going well. Tom

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/26/2021 5:17:00 AM

Thank you Tom. Everything is going well. I hope you have a nice day today :)

Eve Roper

Date: 8/25/2021 9:41:00 PM

They truly are a hidden in the night and very loud. Great Haiku. Hugs Eve

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/26/2021 5:16:00 AM

Hi Eve They were singing in the day here too. I heard them very loud lastnight as well. Thank you :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/25/2021 3:26:00 PM

I hear those sounds resounding in your words, Heidi. Lovely haiku.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/25/2021 4:25:00 PM

Thank you Vijay! I can hear them ,but not see them. I hope you have a nice evening :)

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