Hidden Beauty

God winked at me and smiled a snail

                                     In robes of Neptune's Abigail 

                                 In the spiral stairs the sea is bare

                                   To a  crisp assail ,a snail in veil



                                 The prince of brine a rainbow hue

                                   a musing glob of earth and sea

                                 You lap up the milk of moon-dew

                                You are as sweet as you should be



Hidden Beauty - Poetry Contest
Sponsor	Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
20th January,2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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February 15, 2015 at 10:55 AM
Rajat, Congratulations on the win. *Skat *
Allison Avatar
February 4, 2015 at 12:15 PM
I am glad you see beauty in the snail - I just see pests in my garden! - great write many congrats on your win Rajat:-) hugs Jan xx
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 20, 2015 at 1:27 PM
What a delightful entry for Rhonda's contest Rajat. #7
Kiser Avatar
January 20, 2015 at 12:40 PM
This rhyme is indeed, a beauty.
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