Hidden Beauty

Lighting up the room, like an early summer morn’ ,
All rainbows , roses and thunderstorms
Quiet and mysterious, ,the calm after winters snowy night 
Beginning at sunrise and ending in delight 

   A sparkling mountain  stream ,passing merrily by
all smiles and flirts ,evoking sighs
Long brown hair,beautiful legs are always a pleasure
along with all kinds of parts nicely measured 

    Sometimes shy , she blushes with beauty and grace,
 sharing bows and laces, all with a smile on her pretty face
overwhelming with warm fuzzy feelings from the start 
Endearing you with a tug from her warm tender heart

    Raining dazzling reflections of future and past 
One sees' her charm , her wit
and her daring in the magic she casts 
So cute and bubbly,  its easy to dream
of being in Paris or Rome or any place as lovely

  Enticing , bewitching ,drawing every eye,
 from the top to her cute little past, 
One gets lured in, while missing the quiet beauty that will always last
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Joyce Avatar
August 1, 2018 at 5:30 PM
this is how not to write a poem..it lacks passion
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 12, 2018 at 8:04 PM
Hello jim, this poem is beautifully created.speaking of a woman tat draws the person to her, she has outer beauty and inner beauty. Have a nice evening my friend.
Dietrich Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 8:20 PM
Sweet poetry, Jim. I see it's dedicated to a lovely friend. HOw awesome
Teagan Avatar
May 20, 2018 at 12:10 AM
This is a very sweet dedication poem for your young friend, Jim.
Joyce Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 3:58 AM
thnx))
Andresen Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 2:44 PM
- So beautifully described in your lovely poem, Jim - Nice to see you back :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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