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Hidden Beauty

Lighting up the room, like an early summer morn’ , All rainbows , roses and thunderstorms Quiet and mysterious, ,the calm after winters snowy night Beginning at sunrise and ending in delight A sparkling mountain stream ,passing merrily by all smiles and flirts ,evoking sighs Long brown hair,beautiful legs are always a pleasure along with all kinds of parts nicely measured Sometimes shy , she blushes with beauty and grace, sharing bows and laces, all with a smile on her pretty face overwhelming with warm fuzzy feelings from the start Endearing you with a tug from her warm tender heart Raining dazzling reflections of future and past One sees' her charm , her wit and her daring in the magic she casts So cute and bubbly, its easy to dream of being in Paris or Rome or any place as lovely Enticing , bewitching ,drawing every eye, from the top to her cute little past, One gets lured in, while missing the quiet beauty that will always last

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Date: 8/1/2018 5:30:00 PM
this is how not to write a poem..it lacks passion
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Date: 6/12/2018 8:04:00 PM
Hello jim, this poem is beautifully created.speaking of a woman tat draws the person to her, she has outer beauty and inner beauty. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 6/2/2018 8:20:00 PM
Sweet poetry, Jim. I see it's dedicated to a lovely friend. HOw awesome
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Date: 5/20/2018 12:10:00 AM
This is a very sweet dedication poem for your young friend, Jim.
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Jim Joyce
Date: 5/23/2018 3:58:00 AM
thnx))
Date: 4/24/2018 2:44:00 PM
- So beautifully described in your lovely poem, Jim - Nice to see you back :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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