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Fog Obstructs A full view Beware the beast Fog.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/23/2019 6:35:00 AM
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It is "the beast" when I see six hundred trucks in the fast lane rushing into it at six hundred miles an hour, I shudder, sliding over to the slowest lane of all.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/23/2019 7:55:00 PM
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Me too! It's shocking how thick it can get. Glad you dropped by.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 4/6/2015 7:32:00 PM
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Smile your on Candid Camera...I hope...that wasn't really a beast was it. Oh the stuff that lives in the fog of our minds. Thanks for the read!
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/7/2015 11:43:00 PM
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Well without the fog, would we have those wondrous moments of clarity when the truth is revealed? Sometimes the beast is irritable; at other times it's gifting us with great things. Thanks for dropping by, Maurice.
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Funom Makama
Date: 3/26/2015 11:37:00 AM
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short but deep.... Wonderful! Really wonderful... The imagery is simply perfect
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/7/2015 11:43:00 PM
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Wow, thanks so much, Funom.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/7/2015 11:37:00 AM
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The imagery and shear innocence of your words are impressive, creating a state of mind. Emile. #7
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/9/2015 12:49:00 AM
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Many thanks, Emile.
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Paul Callus
Date: 1/27/2015 8:26:00 AM
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Lovely...haunting and mysterious! It's all hidden in the mind, waiting for release! // paul
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/28/2015 2:53:00 PM
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Indeed. Many thanks for your comments.
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Casarah Nance
Date: 1/26/2015 6:54:00 PM
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makes me wonder what beast in hiding in the fog!
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/26/2015 10:44:00 PM
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Ah, but you'll have to figure that one out...I just provide the setting. Thanks and glad that you stopped by to read and comment.

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