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Fog Obstructs A full view Beware the beast Fog.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Krutsinger Avatar
February 23, 2019 at 6:35 AM
It is "the beast" when I see six hundred trucks in the fast lane rushing into it at six hundred miles an hour, I shudder, sliding over to the slowest lane of all.
Kiser Avatar
February 23, 2019 at 7:55 PM
Me too! It's shocking how thick it can get. Glad you dropped by.
Yvonne Avatar
April 6, 2015 at 7:32 PM
Smile your on Candid Camera...I hope...that wasn't really a beast was it. Oh the stuff that lives in the fog of our minds. Thanks for the read!
Kiser Avatar
April 7, 2015 at 11:43 PM
Well without the fog, would we have those wondrous moments of clarity when the truth is revealed? Sometimes the beast is irritable; at other times it's gifting us with great things. Thanks for dropping by, Maurice.
Makama Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 11:37 AM
short but deep.... Wonderful! Really wonderful... The imagery is simply perfect
Kiser Avatar
April 7, 2015 at 11:43 PM
Wow, thanks so much, Funom.
Pinet Avatar
February 7, 2015 at 11:37 AM
The imagery and shear innocence of your words are impressive, creating a state of mind. Emile. #7
Kiser Avatar
February 9, 2015 at 12:49 AM
Many thanks, Emile.
Callus Avatar
January 27, 2015 at 8:26 AM
Lovely...haunting and mysterious! It's all hidden in the mind, waiting for release! // paul
Kiser Avatar
January 28, 2015 at 2:53 PM
Indeed. Many thanks for your comments.
Nance Avatar
January 26, 2015 at 6:54 PM
makes me wonder what beast in hiding in the fog!
Kiser Avatar
January 26, 2015 at 10:44 PM
Ah, but you'll have to figure that one out...I just provide the setting. Thanks and glad that you stopped by to read and comment.
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