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They take from their God
Serenity, Peace, and Justice
I give that back to mine

Their masks disguise them
Allegiance therefore binds them
True love then blinds them

Temples crumble harsh
Angels trumpet loudly now
Facades lifting off

Demons bare in light
Naked breathing fire lashing
Truth shields the penitent

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Andrea Dietrich

April 17, 2012 at 7:29 PM

This is a strong one, Tim!!! I enjoyed this. WEll, I think you are my last comment for the night. Time for other things now. See ya, Andrea

Poet Destroyer A

April 13, 2012 at 12:50 AM

Tim, wow... this comes from the power of ones mind...i like the perception in your mind... deep. ... always..pd

Russell Sivey

April 12, 2012 at 9:40 PM

Wow Tim, this is truly a magnificent write my friend! It's nice to see you back again, we missed you while you were away! This is a tremendous poem that you have written! I thought highly of the second senryu as that flows better and where its message is portrayed very well! Thanks for sharing your poem that you have written for us all! I really enjoyed your write that I have read this evening! Great Work!

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