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Hibiscus Flowers

hibiscus flowers dance in the warm summer breeze elderly pair kiss
Inspired by contest:Senryu Of Being Misjudged Written: July 09, 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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July 21, 2015 at 1:17 AM
that is so warm Sara Love SKAT
Skelly Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 4:54 AM
Wonderful Hibiscus moment. Best wishes Delice
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July 11, 2015 at 6:27 AM
- A lovely poem, dear Sara - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
July 10, 2015 at 11:25 PM
sweet one. I don't know why it is about being misjudged though.
Kendrick Avatar
July 11, 2015 at 7:49 AM
Andrea, Sorry that you didn't get the relationship in being misjudged..Maybe in a few years you will understand.. Sara
Horsman Avatar
July 10, 2015 at 11:08 AM
This is truly lovely, love the sentiment...
Kendrick Avatar
July 11, 2015 at 7:47 AM
Harry, I think you got it..Thanks fro the review.. Sara
Nunez Avatar
July 9, 2015 at 10:10 PM
Oh wow. Just perfect! This should be high up there!
Kendrick Avatar
July 11, 2015 at 7:46 AM
Thanks for the encouraging review of my work..Sara
Allison Avatar
July 9, 2015 at 5:37 PM
what a charming poem - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Kendrick Avatar
July 11, 2015 at 7:45 AM
Thanks for the kind review..
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