Hi There Reality

20/11/2013

Hi there reality
It's been so long
Since last time we have chat prolonged
I think I'm just gonna say hi
Then bye...
I'm leaving again
You're no better than then
Always in restraint
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February 18, 2016 at 11:56 AM
Ha, love the personal hi... LINDA
Horne Avatar
December 4, 2013 at 3:03 PM
clever and thought provoking piece, my friend
Lamoureux Avatar
November 30, 2013 at 8:54 AM
You inspired me to write a poem Dindu.
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November 30, 2013 at 8:21 AM
As poets we can escape reality any time we wish. We also have the power to rewrite it. I enjoyed this thought provoking piece.
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November 26, 2013 at 4:37 PM
I do the same thing all the time! Sometimes, it is better to forget the harsh reality of life, and live inside a fantasy world. Because, there we are protected and we feel safer than we normally would be! I really like this poem, Dinda! It is very unique and interesting! Great work!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem. I appreciate it very much! :)
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