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Hey Mister

You said you loved me and I believed \Oh, how you deceived \Hey Mister you promised to be good to me \And now you leave? \You said I was a lady \Sweet and gentle \You said that I was smart and limber \Hey Mister \You eat my food I cooked for you \You tasted the fruit \And said it was tight \So, why, why wasn't I worth the fight? \Hey Mister \What went wrong? \What happened to our favorite song? \Color faded to gray the day you went away.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/17/2013 10:42:00 PM
Hi Kellie, CONGRATULATIONS on having your poem featured this week........ Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 8/17/2013 9:46:00 PM
Kellie, . Congratulations!!! It's nice to see your poem Featured on the soups Home Page, this past week :-) goodnight~ Luv* LINDA ...
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Date: 7/9/2013 12:52:00 PM
Kellie, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
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