Hey Love

"Hey love can you hear me?" "Illuminate my way" "Here I stand pretending" "Without you my world is ending" "Hey love can you hear me" "Illuminate my way" "Baby please, will you stay".... -A song for my bear

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Danielle Knox

Date: 1/8/2010 6:46:00 AM

I can hear you. Great poem. This is one of my favorites by you. Keep writing. :) -Danielle

Alley Poe

Date: 6/2/2009 3:12:00 PM

Aww my love you posted the song you always sing me! So sweet! -Always your Alley

Zoe Lambert

Date: 6/2/2009 10:19:00 AM

This poem is short and sweet....and has a dynamic effect...I dunno what you call it.anywayzzzzzz "Brilliant"....!!!! yeah....thats the word.! And Jeramiah, thanks for the encouraging comment you made on my poem.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/2/2009 2:10:00 AM

she can hear you,how cant she?all these pledges of love for her,do youhave any doubt bro-;)sweet write--charma