Edward Orozco Poet Ballad

Hey Love

"Hey love can you hear me?"
"Illuminate my way"
"Here I stand pretending"
"Without you my world is ending"
"Hey love can you hear me"
"Illuminate my way"
"Baby please, will you stay"....












-A song for my bear

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Danielle Knox January 8, 2010 at 6:46 AM I can hear you. Great poem. This is one of my favorites by you. Keep writing. :) -Danielle

Alley Poe June 2, 2009 at 3:12 PM Aww my love you posted the song you always sing me! So sweet! -Always your Alley

Zoe Lambert June 2, 2009 at 10:19 AM This poem is short and sweet....and has a dynamic effect...I dunno what you call it.anywayzzzzzz "Brilliant"....!!!! yeah....thats the word.! And Jeramiah, thanks for the encouraging comment you made on my poem.

Charmaine Chircop June 2, 2009 at 2:10 AM she can hear you,how cant she?all these pledges of love for her,do youhave any doubt bro-;)sweet write--charma