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Hey I'M Mr Nice, I Mean Ice

Well I originate from way up here you see these water drops called rain but when temperatures fall I do appear for I'm ice, most folks call me a winter pain You see I freeze into all shapes now if you hold me I'm really cold and when you do I'll get impatient for I melt turn to water, not like gold In winter all you car drivers hate me for I form all over your glass harden fast on the windowpane needing scrapers to get me off fast Now I'm not finished with you guys so to the roads and motorways, I go making it slippery so can't brake fast but if you use your sense you go slow Dangerous I am too on walkways about in winter old folks can get nasty falls I cover their ways so to slip and slide but hey I'm Mr nice(ice) in your mall! (I have written this poem from the perspective that I am ICE speaking from its personal perspective.)

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Date: 7/9/2020 11:39:00 AM
A very clever poem Gordon and the personification from the ICE point of view is profound. Well penned my friend and be safe. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 7/9/2020 1:30:00 PM
Hi Jennifer, so glad you loved it and found it profound too. Trust you are ok as hearing SA was quite bad with virus. Blessings and hugs, Gordon
Date: 7/7/2020 10:56:00 PM
A great personification poem, Gordon. Much of this I have no personal experience with thankfully. I would hate to drive on icy roads. :) Rhonda xx
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 7/8/2020 2:34:00 AM
Hi Rhonda, Thanks for your kind thoughts and indeed glad you enjoyed it. You wouldn't like it in the Rhonda in the winter! Blessings, Gordon
Date: 7/5/2020 8:24:00 PM
Ice isn't always bad. I love it in my tea. You express this so well. Ice can be very dangerous. Always be careful. ~ Brandy
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 7/6/2020 2:47:00 AM
Hi Brandy, Thanks for dropping in and I had forgotten about the ice tea, Hope you're doing ok, keep safe always, Blessings, Gordon
Date: 7/5/2020 6:09:00 PM
Hello Gordon McConnell,winter is not my fav. season. I have trouble walking in the freezing rain and deep snow. Have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/7/2020 2:20:00 PM
Hello Gordon, McConnell, yes I enjoy your poems. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 7/6/2020 2:45:00 AM
Hi Darlene, so nice to see you and glad you liked it. Blessings, Gordon

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