Hey!!!!

Hey you!
I said let me finish!
I'm not done with you just yet!
My heart feels for your stupidity 
and my soul cries out for your life.
How come you can't see that your problems are no longer mistakes?
And how come you don't notice that soon the ones who love you
will soon turn away?
I'm puzzled here, so please help me out!
Why must you smile after every single fault?

Hey you!
I'm not done with you just yet!
My hands are shaking from the discovery of your ignorance.
And my head hurts because I just can't stop thinking.
What makes you think that what you do is never wrong?
Or what you say is fine because you decided to stand strong.
I don't understand you, hell I use to think I knew you!
But now all I can remember is me thinking of how much I'm beginning to hate you.

Damn you!
Damn you!
What the hell are you doing?
I said we're not done yet, so where are you going?
Why can't you understand that life awaits for no one?
Do you know that if you buy stale bread it'll be stale when your hungry?
So why give nothing, and strive for less?
Don't let your showing off fool you, 
because before you know it you'll be completely depressed.

Hey you!
Hold your head up when I'm talking!
Don't you ever look down, 
not even if your falling!
You are loved by so many
and hated by few. 
Do you know that it will always be that way? 
Even when your doing you...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 1/18/2009 12:05:00 PM
It's hard to love someone when they can't see how much they are loved. Wonderful write with a great expression of how you feel. Blessings, ~Michaela~
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Date: 1/18/2009 10:02:00 AM
Loving some people can be the hardest thing in the world... Never stop.... E
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