Hesitant Dreams

HESITANT DREAMS 

The impatient gates of 
Expectations,
Opened wide before the
Hesitant dreams,
And
Begged them, forward to rush, 
For to
Cross the threshold of 
The awaiting reality!


© Demetrios Trifiatis
    14 APRIL 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Bacha Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 8:19 PM
Great, awesome. Love Terry xoxo 7 <<<<
Trifiatis Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 11:27 PM
My dear Therese, Thank you so much!
Sivey Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 6:14 AM
I loved reading this awesome write this morning! You have portrayed dreams and reality very well my friend! Thank you for sharing this with all of us! Great Work!!
Trifiatis Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 12:42 PM
My very good friend, thank you so much!
Andresen Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 5:28 AM
Lovely written, my friend! - Have a beautiful Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 12:43 PM
Thank you Anne Lise. Has spring arrived there? Ha-ha!
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