He's the One

I've waited so long,
And hated,so hard
Then came,a bright ray
Of sunshine,and their he was..
It felt so right,the way,
He held me..soo tight
With warmth in his heart.
His eyes as blue as the sky
And he had this sparkle,
So bright in his eyes.
I knew he would make it to me,
I waited so long,
And hated so hard ,
I fell in love,I've waited for this day,
I knew that he was the one..
The butterflies...
When he touches my skin,
And looks into my eyes.I get 
This rush..inside,that doesn't 
Go away..ive waited for this day
He's the man of my dreams..
And I'm not alone,I always knew
He would come rescue me,
That would take this hurt and pain 
Away from me...and now I have him,
Here..to take away my tears,
 
To make us happy..For the rest
Of my years.....he's the one!!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Allison Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 11:50 AM
Beautiful heartfelt poem Patricia:-) hugs Jan xx
Biswal Avatar
March 25, 2016 at 2:33 PM
Its filled with emotions... Great poem...
Bocsa Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 12:01 PM
An onion is given for some lovers, A thorny rose for happy others. A cross to be followed by people:many; A cup of bitterness and a drop of honey: You re-lived no time in beauty`s rhymes.
Salehi Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 6:20 PM
This is nice... I bet you're in love..
Andresen Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 2:29 PM
- A lovely poem, Patricia :) - Welcome to Poetry Soup :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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February 29, 2016 at 1:38 PM
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