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Hes Taking a Break

off the wall dancing electric blue shoes awhirl one-armed pushup 11/5/2020

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Date: 11/6/2020 1:50:00 AM
This one has a jazziness to it that makes it sing Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/6/2020 6:52:00 AM
Thank you, Caren!
Date: 11/5/2020 6:33:00 PM
I'm with Andrea (below). This is really cool. The height of cool. ~ Spinning on one finger
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/5/2020 7:20:00 PM
Thank you very much!
Date: 11/5/2020 2:38:00 PM
cool title for a cool little poem!! gosh, I am so behind this week with all the poets.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/5/2020 7:19:00 PM
Thank you for taking the time to read mine :)

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