Hes Taking a Break

off the wall dancing electric blue shoes awhirl one-armed pushup 11/5/2020

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/6/2020 1:50:00 AM

This one has a jazziness to it that makes it sing Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/6/2020 6:52:00 AM

Thank you, Caren!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/5/2020 6:33:00 PM

I'm with Andrea (below). This is really cool. The height of cool. ~ Spinning on one finger

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/5/2020 7:20:00 PM

Thank you very much!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/5/2020 2:38:00 PM

cool title for a cool little poem!! gosh, I am so behind this week with all the poets.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/5/2020 7:19:00 PM

Thank you for taking the time to read mine :)