Hes Taking a Break

off the wall dancing electric blue shoes awhirl one-armed pushup 11/5/2020
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Krutsinger Avatar
November 6, 2020 at 1:50 AM
This one has a jazziness to it that makes it sing Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 6, 2020 at 6:52 AM
Thank you, Caren!
Wolf Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 6:33 PM
I'm with Andrea (below). This is really cool. The height of cool. ~ Spinning on one finger
Rodrigues Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 7:20 PM
Thank you very much!
Dietrich Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 2:38 PM
cool title for a cool little poem!! gosh, I am so behind this week with all the poets.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 7:19 PM
Thank you for taking the time to read mine :)
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