He's Almost Half-Blind Now

He’s almost half-blind now
     his right eye, oh my!

Once-fabulous hand-eye coordination
     replaced by daily frustration

Doesn’t hear too well these days
     "Again... Please repeat! What did you say?"

His spine looks like a barber’s pole
     feels like a whack-a-mole

Hips stiffer than petrified wood
     his walker does him little to no good

Knees like old-fashioned shoes, they buckle
     if it weren’t for the agony, he’d chuckle

As for his feet, the bottoms have no feeling
     the slightest crack in the pavement sends him reeling

But he’s determined to count his blessings 
     even if with his body nature seems to be messing

He can still see well enough to write a story
     his left eye spared damage, thanks to God in all His glory

And the latest gossip he doesn’t have to hear
      doesn’t even have to cover his ears 

As for his crooked spine, mindfulness came with it as a gift
      a practice - a habit - he now knows not to give short shrift

I could go on through the rest of his body's litany
      but surely you already know ~ this poem is about me
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Delegans Avatar
September 7, 2026 at 10:58 AM
Sounds like an experienced and wise writer to me!
Wolf Avatar
September 7, 2026 at 7:41 PM
If 'experience' makes one wise, I ought to be a genius! Thanks, Christopher.
Crandall Avatar
September 7, 2026 at 10:42 AM
at least we can still right poetry, and laugh - good one Gershon!
Crandall Avatar
September 7, 2026 at 7:46 PM
haha, believe it or not, that wasn't intentional - lol. It was kind of a (un?)happy accident. I make a lot of homonym type typos.
Wolf Avatar
September 7, 2026 at 7:42 PM
Yep. We can still 'right' poetry, as you say... intentionally?! lol. Thanks, David.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 6, 2026 at 4:26 PM
oh my, dear Gershon. Aging just sucks
Wolf Avatar
September 6, 2026 at 5:06 PM
What can you do, except to play the hand you're dealt!
Rolland Avatar
September 5, 2026 at 9:01 PM
well written, hope it is just a joke, you are not so old, whatever everyone will be concerned enjoy you Sunday
Wolf Avatar
September 5, 2026 at 9:07 PM
The only 'joke' is that it's no joke. I thank God for His Love, and play the hand I'm dealt. ~ gw
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