Heron Contest

The Heron, grey priest of the shallow mere
Stalks slow and calculated t’ward its prey
With cool far seeing vision of a seer
And knowing his own power needs no defray
For he alone adjudicates the day

His strategy grinds more than single axe
A long unhurried glide path to new gaze
Will reposition him for a climax
And total consummation of his plays
The end - submission that for him is praise
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Marcum Wong Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 1:36 PM
This entry stirs the majesty of nature in my heart Geoffrey. Brilliantly conveyed! Congratulations on your deserving win! xxoo : )
Dietrich Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 9:58 AM
i don't know much about herons, but this gives me an idea!! Congrats on your win with this nature loving poem, Geoffrey.
Brewer Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 10:21 AM
Thank you very much, Andrea.
Canerdy Avatar
September 7, 2019 at 10:33 PM
Geoffrey, thank you for your GREAT entry. Congratulations on your win. Janice
Brewer Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 10:20 AM
Many thanks, Janice.
Wolf Avatar
August 7, 2019 at 8:59 AM
Thank you for the tutorial on herons! I really knew zilch about this bird before reading your quintain. ~ gw
Brewer Avatar
August 7, 2019 at 9:58 AM
Should be taken with a pinch of salt, and poetic licence.
Allison Avatar
August 3, 2019 at 3:06 PM
wow Geoffrey a very descriptive poem I especially love the opening line and describing him as a priest ... guess he is waiting for 'prey' - just love it!:-) hugs Jan xx
Brewer Avatar
August 4, 2019 at 9:38 AM
Glad you like the metaphor. Many thanks for the feedback, Jan.
Gauthier Avatar
July 29, 2019 at 3:15 PM
Love the reverent tone of your poem for this most elegant bird who is the epitome of grace and patience.
Brewer Avatar
July 29, 2019 at 3:43 PM
Thank you very much, Line
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