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11/5/2025 for Illusku: Illustrated Haiku Challenge 3 Poetry Contest sponsored by JCB Brul

heron

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    snow white
    straightens out a 
      graceful neck 
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              h     h
              a     e
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              s     g
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              i      t 
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Dietrich Avatar
December 9, 2025 at 11:38 AM
I really like this. Congrats in the contest
Crandall Avatar
December 10, 2025 at 12:49 PM
Thanks, Andrea!
Goldsmith Avatar
December 8, 2025 at 12:09 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your "heron" a fun/creative write. Have a fun day with your win.............
Crandall Avatar
December 10, 2025 at 12:49 PM
Thanks, Paula!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 5:07 PM
good one...best wishes with this contest entry as well.
Crandall Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 5:45 PM
Thanks, Sara!
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