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Line Gauthier's Bite Size 94 Poetry Contest...submitted 5 Dec 2024
light gently sailed before me, it was a heron, fragile being- her white hair flowing over mine like the touch of the heaven`s stars; and that splendor fell upon my soul, as I`ve seen her purity swell within.

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Date: 12/17/2024 6:32:00 AM
Nette I find it remarkable how you take something like this encounter and elevate it with words of magic. It does make me smile and shows how you view the world with such very positive projection from your own soul. Really remarkable to see kindness expressed like this. Smiles!
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Date: 12/7/2024 7:06:00 PM
'light gently sailed before me' beautiful... congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
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Date: 12/5/2024 8:51:00 AM
your poem felt like a peaceful moment of spiritual bonding with this heron...a sense of bliss
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Date: 12/5/2024 1:44:00 AM
Beautiful!!!
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Date: 12/4/2024 8:54:00 PM
Weird- we're like on the same page "white hair" was in my last poem, simply beautiful work, Nette <3
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Date: 12/4/2024 4:53:00 PM
trips I liked about Florida dear poet...heron ')
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