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HERO Externally I watch the moon with no reflection in my loft I lay awake perchance to dream to ponder while my eyes are closed to seek a quietude of peace an atmosphere that it may seem away from all the revelry and soon a vivid dream will bloom a skirmish with my deadly foes of braving battle till I win to claim the beauty I adore my overt thoughts despite the throes my enemies have been subdued their strenght abated by my lance I am the hero of my Dame my dream is a reality in context with my sanity my former dream has been acclaimed Tri -Con Poetry Contest Sponsored by Emile Pinet July 1, 2019

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Date: 8/1/2019 9:19:00 AM
Congratulations Ralph! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest, it was a very difficult contest to judge but your poem caught my eye, well done my friend, Emile.
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Date: 7/28/2019 10:52:00 PM
I love this enchanted poem Ralph. Best of luck in the contest, but I doubt you will need it. xxoo : )
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Date: 7/28/2019 6:16:00 PM
Ralph, I like this poem. You have the chops. -Richard
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 8/3/2019 8:06:00 AM
Thank you, QTR!
Date: 7/27/2019 6:38:00 PM
ohh, visually fascinating, ralph.. i like!..huggs
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Date: 7/25/2019 12:53:00 PM
absolutely beautiful Ralph I love the flow of the poem, I sure hope Emile will love this one:-) hugs Jan xx
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 8/3/2019 8:07:00 AM
Thank you, Jan (oops)
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 7/25/2019 8:44:00 PM
Hi Judy: Thank you and regards to you and your husband. Emile was nice enough to tell me to correct it.

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