hern appear'd in this garden

Thrice

Hot spring
Early summer
Chilly low season

How could i (not bella)
Forget such bloom (twice in june)

Front i
Certainly
The neighborz
Through the scrim
Front mine eyne (count mine torso'z pounding)
moundz
'top uv
moundz

The glow 'bout mine face (bella'z)
Them roses
those thornz

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Date: 9/22/2024 5:03:00 AM
taking care of his garden ? work also as a metaphor, enjoyed yann
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James Peranteau
Date: 9/22/2024 4:51:00 PM
explicating(it's results)more like it ,)
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