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Hermit On a Twig

A harvest moon peeps Through the silver mango tree Hermit on a twig

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Skat A

Date: 8/20/2013 8:22:00 PM

Hello Manel, , i love the moon, you captured the imagery well... xox~ SKAT ~

Sue-Ellen Newman

Date: 8/11/2013 3:18:00 AM

Love it, can see the little hermit just hanging on the twig, true to form and count, well done, blessings sueellen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/26/2013 11:25:00 PM

yep, you have just become a new fave poet of mine!!

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 7/17/2013 11:18:00 PM

Excellent haiku. Well done madam. Tfs

Jack Ellison

Date: 7/17/2013 2:10:00 PM

Oh love this one! Nice Hiaku... hugs, Jack xox

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/17/2013 12:50:00 PM

I like this one as well but the Pantoum is the jewel in your crown today.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/16/2013 11:13:00 AM

- Nice haiku Manel ! - Well done ! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Manel Gunatillake
Date: 7/17/2013 10:01:00 AM

Thank you love!