Hermit On a Twig

A harvest moon peeps 
Through the silver mango tree
Hermit on a twig
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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August 20, 2013 at 8:22 PM
Hello Manel, , i love the moon, you captured the imagery well... xox~ SKAT ~
Newman Avatar
August 11, 2013 at 3:18 AM
Love it, can see the little hermit just hanging on the twig, true to form and count, well done, blessings sueellen
Dietrich Avatar
July 26, 2013 at 11:25 PM
yep, you have just become a new fave poet of mine!!
Sathasivam Avatar
July 17, 2013 at 11:18 PM
Excellent haiku. Well done madam. Tfs
Ellison Avatar
July 17, 2013 at 2:10 PM
Oh love this one! Nice Hiaku... hugs, Jack xox
Lamoureux Avatar
July 17, 2013 at 12:50 PM
I like this one as well but the Pantoum is the jewel in your crown today.
Andresen Avatar
July 16, 2013 at 11:13 AM
- Nice haiku Manel ! - Well done ! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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July 17, 2013 at 10:01 AM
Thank you love!
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