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Scared, anxious, and tearful Hopeful, wanting to get it over Thoughts random and racing Not the life I want or need Wells of brine, release the tension Vibrations, spasms of grief

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/17/2010 8:00:00 PM
Can so relate to the emotion in this poem.. all those state the reader has experienced... short and to the point .. powerful last line indeed.. pulls the poem tightly together.. enjoyed.. with luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 6/17/2010 12:40:00 AM
I can relate with this piece - thank you for sharing rgds WN
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Date: 6/16/2010 9:20:00 PM
this one has lots of feeling in it! thanks for your comment to me today. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 6/16/2010 8:24:00 AM
I can feel the essence of this poem. There are times when one has to play out the hand that is dealt. It's always an adventure. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 6/16/2010 4:33:00 AM
Know the feeling for I have been there and done that...Keep the creative pen flowing..Mom...I hope that I didn't scare you with what I said ...I am sure that this doctor will be much better...
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Date: 6/15/2010 11:41:00 PM
I can relate so much ...lovelly way of expression x thanks for reading my work sarah x
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Date: 6/15/2010 8:53:00 PM
an appropriate poem about feelings...nice write. Thanks for reading my poem.
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Date: 6/15/2010 7:48:00 PM
Nice expressions with intense feelings
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Date: 6/15/2010 6:35:00 PM
Dear Doris, this is ironically just how I am feeling. There are some things going on of which you are probably not aware, but I will only be signing on occasionally to offer comments and will no longer be posting poetry. God bless you for always showing such kindness in your comments. Love, Carolyn
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