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Heres Heaven

Here’s Heaven As we approach the Pearly Gates Heaven’s crew anxiously awaits As our Soul soundly negotiates how to enter Heaven and debates If we lived without sinister sin the Gates would open and we’re in For now our new journey will begin without our earthly scrimy skin ~~~ The Gates open welcoming wide as we slowly walk worthful inside We are greeted by an Angelic guide as they whisper here we reside Golden gates behind stand mile high reflections of pearls in our eye Where Angels faithfully fly climbing clouds for their love will liquefy ~~~ Rows of mountains protruding peaks for Heaven rejoices as it speaks Kissing cherub’s chubby cheeks and nestled naps near curbing creeks Riding rollercoasters reaching sky breathing ambient air of apple pie Harps playing a luminous lullaby where shimmering streams beautify ~~~ Armies of botanical floral display where children dance to their ballet A cheerful celebration every day and the sun shines bright never grey On clouds of cotton candy chewing with robes of silk seemly sewing Where our love is always renewing in the midst of Heaven's viewing. Aug.20.2018 Describe heaven Sponsored by: Faraz Ajmal Placed 1'st
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Arowolo Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 6:27 PM
wonderful and interesting piece...Congrats on your well deserved win in this contest...
Neumann Avatar
September 19, 2018 at 2:22 AM
Congratulations on your big win. Many wishes, Kai
Ajmal Avatar
September 19, 2018 at 2:13 AM
Your this poem sure is a masterpiece, full of wonderful imagery and certainly a joy to read, many many congratulations on your 1st position in my contest, good luck and have a really nice day
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 18, 2018 at 6:11 PM
Hrllo Winged Warrior, oh how beautiful is this poem. I had many visions as I was reading. Have a nice evening my friend.
Pappadogiannis Avatar
September 18, 2018 at 3:04 PM
Oh wow, well done. This was a heavenly piece... 'armies of botanical floral display...', how perfect is this description!! :) Congratulations on your win.
Duet Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 5:14 PM
Congrats on your 1st place win for this lovely poem.
Roper Avatar
September 16, 2018 at 7:26 PM
Wonderful imagery of heaven, ^WW^, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve~`*
Haight Avatar
September 16, 2018 at 6:10 PM
Such beautiful imagery of Heaven that you have given us with your words, WW, and the lovely music helps to carry us into that wonder that you present. Congratulations on your First Place win. Sandra
Nicole Avatar
September 16, 2018 at 4:08 PM
Light touches your darkened pen. You have created a masterpiece- once again. The music wraps around your thoughts with such grace. Your thoughts lift me up. Congratulations WW, on this win. :) Brandy
Richards Avatar
September 16, 2018 at 2:39 PM
Well done WW !! The music addition (sound effect) adds such a beautiful background for your poem! Congrats to you !!
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 16, 2018 at 2:03 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful First Placement WW! : )
Gauthier Avatar
September 16, 2018 at 12:43 PM
Lovely, WW. Congrats on your gold medal win.
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 22, 2018 at 6:42 AM
A lovely vision of heaven WW. I so enjoyed the imagery so brilliantly expressed that I felt as if I just journeyed there myself. Outstanding! : )
Bateman Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 6:21 PM
Hello WW!! A most beautiful and radiant description here, in "Here's Heaven." Best of Luck in the contest with your entry here!! The imagery and the masterful word-picture you've painted with this rhyme is quite outstanding!! A FAVE -- ABSOLUTELY!! Best Wishes, Gary
Smith Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 2:02 PM
We must have read the same book WW, best wishes...
Trifiatis Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 9:29 AM
What an idealistic view of heaven through our earthly eyes but I am almost certain the view will be quite different and we would be pleasantly surprised dear, WW! Your writing absolutely heavenly dear friend!
Michael Avatar
August 20, 2018 at 12:17 PM
Wow...heavenly ... the hope we wish on ~ with angels singing ~ the joy of new beginnings...Enjoyed it...All the best WW
Sands Avatar
August 20, 2018 at 8:28 AM
Absolutely beautiful WW. Nicely rhymed too. Good luck in the contest :)
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