Heres Heaven

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Here’s Heaven As we approach the Pearly Gates Heaven’s crew anxiously awaits As our Soul soundly negotiates how to enter Heaven and debates If we lived without sinister sin the Gates would open and we’re in For now our new journey will begin without our earthly scrimy skin ~~~ The Gates open welcoming wide as we slowly walk worthful inside We are greeted by an Angelic guide as they whisper here we reside Golden gates behind stand mile high reflections of pearls in our eye Where Angels faithfully fly climbing clouds for their love will liquefy ~~~ Rows of mountains protruding peaks for Heaven rejoices as it speaks Kissing cherub’s chubby cheeks and nestled naps near curbing creeks Riding rollercoasters reaching sky breathing ambient air of apple pie Harps playing a luminous lullaby where shimmering streams beautify ~~~ Armies of botanical floral display where children dance to their ballet A cheerful celebration every day and the sun shines bright never grey On clouds of cotton candy chewing with robes of silk seemly sewing Where our love is always renewing in the midst of Heaven's viewing. Aug.20.2018 Describe heaven Sponsored by: Faraz Ajmal Placed 1'st

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Date: 9/21/2018 6:27:00 PM
wonderful and interesting piece...Congrats on your well deserved win in this contest...
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Date: 9/19/2018 2:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your big win. Many wishes, Kai
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Date: 9/19/2018 2:13:00 AM
Your this poem sure is a masterpiece, full of wonderful imagery and certainly a joy to read, many many congratulations on your 1st position in my contest, good luck and have a really nice day
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Date: 9/18/2018 6:11:00 PM
Hrllo Winged Warrior, oh how beautiful is this poem. I had many visions as I was reading. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 9/18/2018 3:04:00 PM
Oh wow, well done. This was a heavenly piece... 'armies of botanical floral display...', how perfect is this description!! :) Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 9/17/2018 5:14:00 PM
Congrats on your 1st place win for this lovely poem.
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Date: 9/16/2018 7:26:00 PM
Wonderful imagery of heaven, ^WW^, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve~`*
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Date: 9/16/2018 6:10:00 PM
Such beautiful imagery of Heaven that you have given us with your words, WW, and the lovely music helps to carry us into that wonder that you present. Congratulations on your First Place win. Sandra
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Date: 9/16/2018 4:08:00 PM
Light touches your darkened pen. You have created a masterpiece- once again. The music wraps around your thoughts with such grace. Your thoughts lift me up. Congratulations WW, on this win. :) Brandy
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Date: 9/16/2018 2:39:00 PM
Well done WW !! The music addition (sound effect) adds such a beautiful background for your poem! Congrats to you !!
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Date: 9/16/2018 2:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful First Placement WW! : )
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Date: 9/16/2018 12:43:00 PM
Lovely, WW. Congrats on your gold medal win.
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Date: 8/22/2018 6:42:00 AM
A lovely vision of heaven WW. I so enjoyed the imagery so brilliantly expressed that I felt as if I just journeyed there myself. Outstanding! : )
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Date: 8/21/2018 6:21:00 PM
Hello WW!! A most beautiful and radiant description here, in "Here's Heaven." Best of Luck in the contest with your entry here!! The imagery and the masterful word-picture you've painted with this rhyme is quite outstanding!! A FAVE -- ABSOLUTELY!! Best Wishes, Gary
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Date: 8/21/2018 2:02:00 PM
We must have read the same book WW, best wishes...
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Date: 8/21/2018 9:29:00 AM
What an idealistic view of heaven through our earthly eyes but I am almost certain the view will be quite different and we would be pleasantly surprised dear, WW! Your writing absolutely heavenly dear friend!
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Date: 8/20/2018 12:17:00 PM
Wow...heavenly ... the hope we wish on ~ with angels singing ~ the joy of new beginnings...Enjoyed it...All the best WW
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Date: 8/20/2018 8:28:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful WW. Nicely rhymed too. Good luck in the contest :)
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