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Here Just Awhile

languishing lonely as a cloud drifting dreamily from the crowd shifting serenely as the seas rising roaming in summer’s breeze easing easily by the sun children chortling with laughter run fading faintly is the day drifting dissolving into the bay tenderly taken by the night silently slipping out of sight

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Date: 12/24/2020 7:13:00 PM
Another winner. Reading the poem, I can visualize the children in glee running about. There is much power in the endearing simplicity of your words and images. Be well, Brian
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Rob Levasseur
Date: 12/25/2020 10:08:00 AM
I certainly appreciate the sentiments. Thank you for reading my poetry.
Date: 12/21/2020 5:00:00 PM
Love the mood you've set for both the external scene and the corresponding scene in the mind. Nicely done! Season's Joy, Gershon
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Rob Levasseur
Date: 12/25/2020 10:08:00 AM
Thank you very kindly Gershon.

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