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Here I Am Frozen

Here I am frozen between planning and action A very blank paper Picture without caption I know not what move to make and certainly not how to make it I helplessly try to trick my mind, but I can't even fake it A pulsating time bomb is ticking in my head Agony throbs through as nowhere I'm led When will I be unparalyzed? When will I see liberation? I despise the clock with it's little time I can't afford to be patient Immobile and unsure like a car without traction Here I am frozen between planning and action

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Date: 7/17/2011 6:37:00 PM
Wow, you sure seem to have captured that moment of paralysis quite well- I can certainly relate to this -- very interesting metaphors you use here as well -- enjoyed this one :)
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