Here Goes

You masochistic silly girl.
Why give this dumb idea a whirl?
You must be sick with human pride.
To see how others feel inside.
It serves you right if you just cried.

Oh you sweet and wonderful girl.
Your love for Jesus makes my heart swirl.
May your love to us always abide.
Don't worry about what I said top side.
Rest asured, I truly lied.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Squyres Avatar
January 14, 2013 at 8:49 PM
I assume this was for a contest...showing two sides or faces? I like the verses, they both work.
Dietrich Avatar
September 20, 2012 at 9:01 PM
ahhhh, I like what you did. You told her the top part was a lie. I sure wish I could get motivated to do this particular contest, but it just seems so odd for me. However, I am really enjoying all the entries I am seeing, such as yours. Good luck in the contest, my friend.
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