Paul Callus Poet Verse

Here Comes the Light

Dawn
Lingers
Scattering
Violet and
Bluish shades of green
Across the limpid sky.

From craggy high cliff nests
Blue rock thrush emerge
To sing first notes
Of nature’s 
Morning 
Hymn.


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Merse Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Malabika Ray Choudhury
       Placed 2nd
© 21st August 2021

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Susan Ashley October 10, 2021 at 10:44 AM Ah, simply beautiful, Paul. Your brilliant pen captures the serenity of dawn with tranquil colors and salient song. Your artistry shines. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mala's contest. Warmest wishes and hugs, my dear friend.. ~Susan

Paula Goldsmith September 4, 2021 at 8:51 AM Congratulations on your win. Yes, here comes the light/dawn. A pretty write and time of the day. Have a blessed day/weekend.................... Paul Callus September 6, 2021 at 7:36 AM Thank you, Paula. I hope that you will enjoy the rest of this new week. Blessings // paul

David Drowley September 2, 2021 at 4:21 PM Excellent, Paul! Congratulations on your win. Keep up the excellent poetry. Paul Callus September 3, 2021 at 6:40 AM Thank you for the visit and encouragement, David. All the best // paul

Sam Kauffman September 1, 2021 at 10:42 AM Paul, this is a vividly painted picture of a serene "morning hymn." Every color builds to the conclusion and adds a nuance to the rising dawn - love "limpid sky." So creative. I feel like I have watched a sunrise through your well chosen words and wonderfully crafted lines! Congratulations for your win and blessings to you! Paul Callus September 1, 2021 at 11:25 AM Thank you for the detailed and complimentary feedback, Sam. I am pleased that this poem was to your liking. ~ Best regards // paul

Mystic Rose Rose September 1, 2021 at 3:50 AM You must have been a photographer too in your youth, cuz you capture it visually with word so well, congrats on your 2nd place win Paul, a stunning entry :) Paul Callus September 1, 2021 at 5:05 AM Thank you, Vienna :) Your pleasant visit is appreciated :) Have a lovely day. Regards /x/ paul

Joanna Daniel August 31, 2021 at 11:34 PM Brilliant, Paul, congratulations:) Paul Callus September 1, 2021 at 12:39 AM Thank you, Jo. You too did very well with your winning entry! Regards // paul

Beata Agustin August 31, 2021 at 9:14 PM Wow! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you. Paul Callus September 1, 2021 at 12:39 AM I love your reaction, Beata...thank you!! Regards & Blessings // paul

Carol Mitra August 31, 2021 at 7:16 PM Lovely nature and an awesome poem with a top win.... Congrats Paul.....all the love keep inspiring :) Paul Callus September 1, 2021 at 12:38 AM Thank you Carol. I loved your winning entry, too! ~ Have a lovely day :) // paul

Malabika Ray Choudhury August 31, 2021 at 4:18 PM Congratulations, Paul, on your fabulous win. You have made my new form amazing with your poetic style. Love ~ Mala Paul Callus August 31, 2021 at 11:42 PM Thank you for the high placement and lovely comments, Mala. As I told Andrea, further down, I enjoyed using this delightful form of yours. ~ Warm regards // paul

Gordon Mcconnell August 25, 2021 at 1:21 PM Such a lovely colourful piece Paul, really enjoyed feasting my eyes on this one. Blessings, Gordon Paul Callus August 29, 2021 at 10:13 AM I ma glad you found my offering to your liking, Gordon....thank you. Regards // paul

Lindsay Laurie August 22, 2021 at 11:20 PM Hello Paul ... I could easily read your verse knowing what the dawn brings. Shades of many colours on clouds and beautiful bird song - thank you Paul - Lindsay Paul Callus August 29, 2021 at 10:12 AM Thank you , Lindsay. I am pleased you're back posting. Best regards // paul

Brandy Nicole August 22, 2021 at 7:41 PM Such a beautiful morning to embrace. My favorite thought being "Violet and Bluish shades of green" because the color is simply breathtaking. I am wrapping your words softly around me. Because. :) Hugs, Brandy Paul Callus August 29, 2021 at 10:11 AM Thank you for yet another most welcome visit, Brandy. I am glad my dawn offering had its desired effect :) Warm regards and hugs // paul

Andrea Dietrich August 22, 2021 at 1:12 PM Gorgeous imagery , Paul. I really enjoy the entries to this contest Paul Callus August 29, 2021 at 3:04 AM Thank you, Andrea. This form is lovely to work with. ~ Regards // paul

Quoth Theraven August 22, 2021 at 10:41 AM Hello Paul, The notes of the 'Blue rock thrush', penned so well in this poem. Like a carefully folded letter placed in an envelope. -Richard Paul Callus August 29, 2021 at 3:02 AM Thank you Richard. Hope you are keeping welol, my friend. ~ Regards // paul

Susan Lawrence August 21, 2021 at 1:53 PM Paul, So descriptive you captured me in your expression and sights and sounds of dawn. A gift indeed. All the best, Susan :) Paul Callus August 22, 2021 at 1:47 AM Thank you for the lovely comments, Susan :) I am pleased it captured your attention. ~ Warm regards // paul

Darlene De Beaulieu August 21, 2021 at 1:06 PM Hello Paul, this is so beautifully said. I do not wake to see the dawn. I have heard that it is a beautiful site. Regards. Darlene Darlene De Beaulieu August 22, 2021 at 11:03 AM Hello paul, oh Paul, I am not a morning person. i doubt if i will ever see the sunrise. Regards Darlene. Paul Callus August 22, 2021 at 1:45 AM Hi Darlene :) One of these days you'll have to get up earlier than usual and enjoy the dawn...then write us a lovely poem to go with it :) Best regards // paul

Ilene Bauer August 21, 2021 at 11:55 AM this is just lovely, paul! i feel like i'm watching (and hearing) the dawn breaking... Paul Callus August 22, 2021 at 1:43 AM Glad you enjoyed it, Ilene...thank you. Have a lovely day. Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit August 21, 2021 at 9:00 AM Exquisite imagery, Paul. Beautifully done! Paul Callus August 21, 2021 at 9:52 AM Pleased you liked it, Vijay; thank you & regards // paul

Tom Cunningham August 21, 2021 at 8:48 AM The birth of a new day captured well in your verse Paul. Hope you're keeping well. Tom Paul Callus August 21, 2021 at 9:51 AM Thank you, Tom. Keeping out of trouble for now :) Take care. Regards // paul

Supraja Kannan August 21, 2021 at 7:08 AM How beautiful!!! Wonderfully explained the beauty of dawn... A winner for me... Paul Callus August 21, 2021 at 7:14 AM Thank you Supraja for your lovely reaction, and for being my frst visitor! Enjoy the weekend, my friend. Regards // paul