Her World

Shes not like other girls,
although she tried to be
too old for her age,
too young for her misery

The mirror showed a face
of a girl who didnt care
and that was all the world 
could see...exactly what was there

And not the person underneath,
the one who mattered more
but the longer it went unnoticed,
the easier it got to ignore.

She always carried wisdom
for whatever lessons life should bring
She wanted more from life,
though it seemed she had everything

She was beautiful
but beauty only goes so far
What goods a pretty face
if thats all you are

She kept her secrets silent
... the world wouldnt understand
why she couldn't face her life
without a bottle in her hand

 Misery is silent- it traps you from yourself
while trying to find who you are
you become somebody else

So she conformed to be like the rest
or so thats how it seemed
it's easy to fake your own happiness
when nobody knows what it means

for a persons truth is seldom 
the way it may appear
cause if you looked a little closer
you'd see she wasn't here

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 4/25/2011 10:19:00 PM
Wow I love this.
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Date: 3/4/2011 3:58:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Nicole. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Enter and enjoy some of the contests and I wish you the best in them. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/4/2011 1:25:00 AM
very good my friend
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Date: 3/3/2011 11:10:00 PM
Great job with this one. Your poetry sounds like they come from personal experience. If that's the case then it makes them all so much more authentic. Where do you get your inspiration?
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