Her wish for twilight till the crack of dawn

When the hot sun begins to drown in the deep mighty ocean,
And the cool moon begins to rise from the high mountains in slow motion,
She starts to fly away steadily with the gentle winds,
As she opens up her beautiful hair and pulls out those ribbons and pins.
The winds carry her to the new planet,yet not discovered;
Sitting up there,gazing at the earth,she murmurs something that's not heard.
Then she suddenly stops,and stares at people sleeping with peace,
And she asks God,"Why are you testing me without surcease?"
"Have faith in me",he smiles and says,but to all her questions he never replies.
And then she sees a magical light over the seven seas and the seven skies.
With a scintilla of love when she tries to touch it,it disappears,
And now she's fed up,'cuz she's trying to do it since many years.
With a pouring rain from her cloudy eyes and a heavy pain that makes her cry,
She holds her soul firmly,preventing it to run away from her body and takes a bitter sigh.
Then she surrounds herself in the storm till the dawn break,when the first light gives her a bliss,
The shooting star decides to take her back to earth,she makes a wish.
Let that girl be a rock and that wish be a secret that you'll know by the end,
It's a tale of a strong rock turning into soft grains of sand.
So, when the cool moon begins to drawn in the deep mighty ocean,
And the hot sun begins to rise from the high mountains in slow motion,
She starts to fly away steadily with the gentle winds,
And she ties back her beautiful hair with those ribbons and pins.
The winds carry her back to earth,where men and women live,
Where,"I'll stay with you forever"they say,but still they leave.
There she starts to live like a normal human with a mile long fake smile,
But,nobody on the earth knows that her mile long fake smile is just a while.
She passes her day breathing heavily in the smoke of hate and love.
She waits from day break till the twilight to fly back up above.
Her waiting ends when the night falls and she flies back to that unknown planet once more,
And everyday with the first ray of sun she returns back to earth's shore.
Do you remember the wish that she made on the shooting star?
It was not a single wish,her multiple wishes are:
She wished,
"This is to every single being on earth,
Can you not make me regret my birth?
I'm no different,I'm just like you,
I'm a soul like you,I feel the pain like you.
Can you please accept me?I'll not disappoint you
Can you please love me the way I love you?"

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Date: 7/27/2024 9:27:00 AM
True poetry has no form but to be beautiful unique and heartfelt. You nailed it.
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Date: 7/27/2024 10:48:00 AM
Thank you so much .. It means a lot :)
Date: 5/18/2024 3:19:00 AM
this is quite the poem. The theme and message really draws you in and the way it's written guarantees an enjoyable read. I really liked it.
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Date: 5/24/2024 8:51:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 5/8/2024 8:13:00 AM
Very mysterious, I like it. Thank you for sharing.
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Date: 5/24/2024 8:51:00 PM
Thank you :) . It means a lot
Date: 5/5/2024 11:57:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 5/24/2024 8:52:00 PM
Thank you :) . This means a lot .
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