Jared Pickett Poet Cinquain

Her Songs****the Modern Cinquain Game****

2,4,6,8,2


wind songs,
branches dancing
to an epoch ballad
Such an inspiring event.
Her songs.



This, my submission into the "Modern Cinquain" game... Thank you James Goff for your
invitation...

Jared Pickett
9/12/09
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Brian Strand September 29, 2009 at 4:29 AM Jared thanks for your welcome comments.Rgds Brian

Moonbee Canady September 21, 2009 at 8:02 PM 2,4,6,8, (to)... Wind Songs... Lovely and Clever, Jared... Nothing like the sound of Earth Breathing... MoonBee

September 18, 2009 at 7:52 PM Wonderful uplifting view in this poem. Good use of imagery. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. Karen

Charmaine Chircop September 18, 2009 at 5:18 PM love this ballad,like an orchestra by Mozart..branched dancing in the wind--Excellent-Charma

Sara Kendrick September 13, 2009 at 4:08 AM Nicely done. I can see the scene. Keep writing. Sara

Carolyn Devonshire September 12, 2009 at 7:34 PM Great cinquain, Jared. Love the sounds and movements you describe in the wind songs! Love, Carolyn

James Marshall Goff September 12, 2009 at 11:16 AM love the sound in this fine cinquain! Jared!...jim

Raul Moreno September 11, 2009 at 10:19 PM Excellent, you have a way with words. I retured your mail...Raul

Raul Moreno September 11, 2009 at 10:01 PM Excellent work Jared, love how you implemented the element of music. I left you some mail...Raul