Her Smile

delving deeper into dying
i just can't find release
from this agony thats thriving 
there is no inner peace
mercey has denied me
so i suffer still
tormented by her smile 
oh the joy 
He must feel
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Freeman Avatar
November 6, 2009 at 6:10 PM
Love means letting go also Christopher. A hard choice, but one must be brave, face the truth. Sincerely, Moses
Atherton Avatar
November 5, 2009 at 11:42 AM
Depressing stuff :/ the last line kinda grips the reader. Keep writing -Matthan
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