Her Secret Admirer

Her steps echoes down the hall,
As she takes my breadth  away into the mall,
Entering,she deprives me of the air of fall,
As her body responds to beauty's call,

Breaking my senses of reason,
My defenses,she shatters into season,
As her smile lights my face's treason,
Leaving it with sweet seasoning, 

I am left holding on to my heart,
As her eyes tears its meekness apart,
Cushioning its fall,my strength starts,
As I ride on shyness's cart,

My heart seeks her affection,
But my words fail for her attention,
As I hope to win her love's election,
I would sit in my corner of no detection,
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kendrick Avatar
August 8, 2009 at 2:59 AM
Nicely written of a secret admirer. Keep writing. Sara
Brown Avatar
August 7, 2009 at 5:13 AM
Another day we are blessed to be here reading and writing poetry. Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry today. Love, Carol
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