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Her Lure

One day I got up With a brand new cup Sipping hot cocoa Getting ready to go I immediately left I was not totally deft I went to the beach For one I beseech I smell her coming by A lure she uses, I die I fall for her time again Whenever the scent began I find her before me A smile full of glee We embrace all at once Feelings that pounce We walk off to the sea Drinking some Russian tea

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/10/2012 8:06:00 PM
simply adorable write Russell.. the lure of ones scent is exotic and the seas culminates the essence of the romantic interlude.. good luck in contest luv.. a certain winner .. I luv the ocean and Summertime.. hot weather and perfume too.. oh..
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Date: 3/9/2012 4:12:00 PM
LOL, love this fun piece
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Date: 3/9/2012 1:05:00 AM
great flowing rhyme ol mate, good one subtle piece of fun, keep it coming bloody great, poetry all sorts u r de 1....
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