Her Last Breath

fallin into dark disper, screaming and crying why dosent anyone care,
she can feel the knife running deep in her arms, drops of warm blood soon to become bruises and scares,
she has crys everynight by feeling so alone, while her mom drinks it up she is home alone,
Shes had it she done ! she has no hope not even none..she opens the door and runs out the house, whereing nothing only her shorts and a easly see threw blouse,
she heads to the store grabbing tons of pills, then running past her house jugging up a step looking hill..
shes knows what she has to do,
she grabs a handful of pills and swollows them in her mouth, her eyes start geting blury trying take one more glance upon her house, 
She falls to the ground no more weeping no more sorrow, thats it its final its finally over now---Larissa Summitt
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Aul Avatar
May 18, 2012 at 8:19 AM
Heartfelt write........George
Devnath  Avatar
May 17, 2012 at 12:40 PM
Very sad poem, God bless all the way to save her, loved always, bl
Devnath  Avatar
May 17, 2012 at 12:39 PM
Very sad poem, God bless all the way to save her, loved always, bl
Burch Avatar
May 17, 2012 at 9:52 AM
Deeply touching Larissa!! *tear* I know this pain you speak of .... and my heart breaks for your character in your story...I know she/he only wants the pain to stop...just the pain--not life--You have a tender heart...thank you so much for sharing...Keep Writing!! :) big hugs, love ya, deb
Summitt Avatar
May 17, 2012 at 9:53 AM
thank you that mean alot :)
Ink-U-Script Avatar
May 17, 2012 at 8:16 AM
Very sad story here!! Only God knows when our time is up!! enjoyed
Summitt Avatar
May 17, 2012 at 9:54 AM
thanks you :)
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