Her Kiss

Gorgeous enormous super moon With influence stronger then ever Foamy waves at night will boom Her pull upon water so clever Stretching her arms out to caress Stroking waves into intoxication Her touch makes the water confess Of its undying devoted appreciation How she loves to tickle shorelines With her magnetic pull of seduction Flowing like that of the serpentines As they kiss upon their introduction
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Fleming Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 1:03 AM
My goodness, poetess - a fav from Son of Spock! I regard that as high praise indeed. An original and cleverly penned slant on an old, tried and trusted theme...nicely contrived, Brenda. In affection. :) john
Chiri Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 1:30 AM
Yea I know right!;) shocked me too! Lol! Thank you John you are too sweet to me!;) All my affection!;)
Wolf Avatar
August 28, 2019 at 5:11 PM
Never thought of the moon as a 'tease' before, as a seducer. Nice, poetic viewpoint here, Brenda. :) gw
Chiri Avatar
August 28, 2019 at 8:26 PM
Lol well I guess we have to see things differently at times but I have always viewed her as a tease! Thanks Gershon!;)
Green Avatar
August 28, 2019 at 2:27 PM
Wonderfully beautiful. This is enchanting Brenda.
Chiri Avatar
August 28, 2019 at 8:25 PM
Thank you Chris!;)
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