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Her Kindness Is a Love That Wll Save Any Life

That barefoot girl runs on the smooth, red sand as a gazelle in the wild, she hears terrifying screams coming from the shore while the surf arises: is somebody about to drown? There are no safeguards watching from their posts, it's after closing time! Her pale face shows panic, but is that her child? There are some people on the beach, the Seaside's distant bells chime... hardly anyone had paid attention to the peaceful surroundings being occupied with their thoughts of contemplation on dreams; seagulls gathered on rocks, take flight seeing her coming: she starts shouting, " Call an ambulance! The child is drowning! " Everybody realizes the seriousness of the matter, and as if in an act of prayer, their gaze wanders far... reaching the fearless swimmer fighting off waves, searching hard; and with great stamina and strong will of mind, she will not be afraid! Her kindness is a love that will save any life experiencing extreme dire; it's the most difficult challenge she faces and will remember a lifetime! Entered in Eve Roper's contest, " Oil Paintings 4 & 5 " My Pick: Oil Painting # 2

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Date: 12/16/2015 9:23:00 PM
ANDREW :) CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN...... SKAT
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Date: 12/12/2015 11:25:00 AM
Fascinating imagery Andrew - love the way you leave the reader wondering:-) hugs Jan xx
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