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Her Inevitable Quest

Inquisitive, her journey began as she broke away from herself through grace she searched from the site of her consciousness, the beginning of the journey of the unending beginning. As she began her journey she never believed she would get to the end of it. Inevitably she asserted blame from afar as she watched carefully her errors while she was lost consciously in her unconscious blindness-her so called inevitable weakness. She forcefully became aware that she had fallen short of her expected-ideal standards. Who are we to blame as her puzzle-like reality’s mysterious misery soared geometrically appearing not to be needing her consent seeming inevitable. The closer she got the more she questioned her reality. It became clear that she needed to fill in the blank spaces in the forms of her life but not to engage in the solutions to the complex equations that proceed from it. Instead she needed to reveal the mystery-message –reason behind it-to figure out what it was telling her to do-learn from it. She said: “The closer I got, the more I questioned, the more it occurred and proved to me that there is more to everything –the world, than we can imagine-ordinarily see”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/2/2010 2:23:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Johnny. Please continue to write and share with us at PoetrySoup the whole year through. Love, Carol
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